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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there again! =)

This chapter is really awesome! I love getting to see things from Greyback's perspective and getting to see Teddy's reaction to what is happening around him. You did a great job not only expressing the two characters, but describing everything also.

The chapter itself flows smoothly as it transitions from scene to scene. The plot line is progressing and ever changing. Oops...Teddy went a little past his original year he set out for. I am really curious as to how much he really knows about Greyback.

I really loved the characterization of Teddy in this chapter. You get to see both sides of him. His eagerness to continue forward finding out more and then you get cautious side too when he doesn't want to reveal his name, although, Greyback has already pegged him as a Lupin.

Keep up the awesome writing!! I look forward to reading more! =)


Author's Response: Hey there!

Ah thanks! :D Woohoo! I was really worried how people would think about my version of a... young ish Greyback! And I'm glad I described everything right.

I hope I can keep the flow up and such, I think my next chapter is a bit choppy. :s He did! And I'll stick that in somewhere, maybe a mistake or something. Hehe.

I really love writing Teddy! I think I'm getting his character down in a nice 3D way, and I'm really happy you like him! :D And he has! But he's not 100% sure, can't be till Teddy says something.

Thank you! I'm sure I'll have chapter 3 done soon!

Mike. :D Thanks again!

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