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Review:AlAndAl says:
Here is your review finally! I always love a good Marauder story!
Anyway, I really like how you portrayed the pure blood families. They always seem to have a mysterious reason for all the sneaky things they do and you really heightened that aspect of them.
The Sirius/Regulus relationship is also written quite well. The tension between them is quite evident and now that Estelle is in the picture once again, their sibling rivalry is taken to a whole new level.
One thing you can work on a bit is the flow of the story. It seems a little choppy to me, but it's not too bad. Just adding a few more sentences to flow from one scene tithe next would finish it off perfectly.
Great job so far!
-Allie

Author's Response: Hello there! :)

I always imagine pureblood families to be the epitome of sly and secretive so I guess that's where it came from :P

I've always thought that there is SO much between them and since this is set after Sirius has ran away, I'm just pushing the hate right now :)

I'll work on the flow more! & thanks for leaving a review! I really appreciate it :)


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