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Review:blue_splash says:
Hola!
What another great chapter! Poor Sirius, I'm glad Marlene was able to help him. Question, are you using all cannon characters? If so, that's remarkable. I can't recall reading a story with all original characters! I'm actually excited to keep reading! I'm curious to find out what happened with Remus and Marlene but I definitley think I'd support a Marlene/Sirius ship more, they're cute together. I also felt bad for Lily when she felt like she didn't have her own 'best friend' hopefully she see's that they're all her best friends! I can't wait for her to start noticing James (: Whoo this is long haha I'm pretty much a fan and will always review! I'll always be looking for that update! Excellent job!

Author's Response: Mary McDonald was mentioned in Snape's flashback. Emmeline Vance, Marlene McKinnon, Alice Prewett and Dorcas Meadowes were all in the Order of the Phoenix as said briefly in the books. So they were never described in the books, but I thought that they would have to have been friends with Lily and James since they were around the same age as them at the time. Remus and Marlene are over, but the feelings may stay longer than Marlene would like. Lily is a little broken after Petunia and Snape have both left her, so it will take some coaxing for her to realize she has a lot of friends. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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