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Review:EverDiggory says:
I'm here with your review! Sorry for the wait!

Grammar: The grammar was fine! I didn't see anything the was incorrect! Nothing to worry about!

Plot: I don't read much of anything with Remus, so this was a nice read! It was nice to see and inside view to someone with such a complex and compelling personality! This was pretty unique, I've never seen anyone else attempt this, but perhaps I'm not looking hard enough.

Imagery: I enjoyed reading the descriptions! I think they were beautiful and made the whole story quite vivid!

Flow: This was fine as well! Sometimes page breaks really mess with the flow but I think you went about it in a way that worked well for this piece! It is impressive because I personally find pagebreaks the devil to deal with.

I really enjoyed reading this! It was so unique, it was really refreshing! Feel free to rerequest(:



Author's Response: Hey! So sorry that it has taken me a while to respond! Life's been...weird in a way. Slightly in a bleeegh mood.

I'm glad that you thought this was a nice read! Remus is my favorite character (outside the trio) and when I started reading Carrie Vaughn's books I began to wonder what would happen if Remus had a pack. In a way, he's always been part of a pack with the Marauders and I wanted to really dig into that. Explain how real live wolves work and how to bring that to a werewolf pack...which we'll soon see. :D

I'm super glad that you enjoyed the imagery as trying to find the balance was hard. The last thing I wanted was for this to be too wordy or not enough description to where it felt dry. Wolf's part was the hardest as there is no dialogue from him.

Thank you so much for your review! I'm thrilled that you liked this, really! :D


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