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Review:Hope's Mom says:
More characters have arrived! Emmeline seems like a piece of work - I look forward to the backstory about why Dorcas hates her so much. Lily picked up that something was wrong with Marlene but Dorcas didn't -maybe Lily is a better friend than she thinks. The Marlene/Remus situation would be really awkward. She is awfully selfless to be worried about hurting his feelings. He has obviously crushed hers. I am a big Remus fan and am disappointed in him here for hurting Marlene. The Marlene/Sirus scene was well done. Thank you for the new chapter.

Author's Response: Emmeline will come up later don't worry. She has only just begun and Dorcas's reasoning will come up.

When it comes to Marlene you'll see that though Dorcas is her best friend, sometimes Dorcas is too focused on herself to see her best friend clearly. Marlene really loved Remus and it did crush her when she realized he didn't feel the same way. Remus is just kind of clueless to the effect he has on people. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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