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Review:Calypso says:
Wow! This was gorgeous!
You have such a rich, vivid writing style, it really transports the reader into your story. I loved how Andromeda's childhood recollections morphed into the present tense scene with her and Ted, it was clever.
I also liked that there was some darkness in Andromeda's relationship with Ted, it was an interesting edge to add...
You fitted in the borrowed first sentence so well that I didn't realise it wasn't yours until the Author's Note! And you used the title cleverly as well.
I am curious about the chapter title- it seemed strange at first because Andromeda and Ted's relationship, and actually her whole relationship with the Black family seems anything but Untainted, but I wondered if it was about her escaping the pureblood society? Or about how the sisters were when they were just children? I wasn't sure...
Anyway, really beautifully written beginning, looking forward to reading the next one! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It makes me so happy that the first sentence didn't seem off to you - I thought it wasn't flowing at all when I was writing it! And I think that Andromeda's relationship with Ted would've had to have a little bit of an edge to it, because they both come from such different backgrounds. As to the chapter title, I was referring to Andromeda's perception of Ted as 'untainted' and how that contrasts with her own dark family background. But I think your interpretations seem a lot deeper, so maybe you should stick with those ;D
Thank you so much for the review!


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