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Review:Calypso says:
I loved finding out a bit more about Dominique and Teddy!
I think you did it in a clever way, because their conversation moved the storyline on, but also told you lots more about them, like Dominique is impulsive with a bit of a Weasley temper, and Teddy is much more thoughtful and indepedent. I'm looking forward to seeing how the relationship between those two characters develops and finding out more about how they feel about each other. Also interested in this strange Squib! And Victoire! Can't wait to meet her and find out about her character too :)

Author's Response: Hey again!
It's so great that you're liking the characters, as this story is based a lot around their 'growing-up' sort of experience and of course, the murder. hehe
And it's awesome the dialogue didn't feel like too much... dialogue is my weakness... *hides*
I think you'll have to wait another chapter to meet Vic, but the Squib...
Thanks for the reviews! :D

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