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Review:Cavell says:
Holy crud (by the way, sorry for the superb delay). I don't know what I was expecting when you expected a review for this, but wow, you exceeded any expectations I might have had for you. I loved Lily and all of your characters. While most put Lily down as the person who was determined to fight and do what was right no matter what it takes, your Lily was the same but she didn't want to fight - of course, she'd do it if she was asked, but for the most she only fought for the Marauders' safety, and I admire you for pulling that off so well :)

Your description is completely amazing! I'm not too good at it, myself, but woah - you pulled everything off flawlessly. I can't say which in this one-shot is my favourite paragraph, because I'm pretty sure I don't have one - all of them were brilliant - because absolutely everything was fantastic. Most people don't write about Lily during the actual war, before Harry was born, so you shattered every cliche this situation might have had, so well done!

Your flow was lovely, and there were no mistakes whatsoever :) Mind you, I'm usually picky about mistakes, so bravo! It held my interest for the whole thing, so don't worry about that, and when Peter showed up I even held my breath :p Anyway, thanks a bunch for requesting, and good luck with the rest of your stories!

--Linn

Author's Response: Thank you so much for dropping by! And I'm sorry it took me so long to respond! I just got back from vacation.

I'm really really REALLY glad that you liked this one shot. It still makes me so nervous, though I don't know why.

Honestly, originality was exactly what I was going for in this piece, especially in the spots you mentioned, so I'm glad you saw that.

I couldn't be happier that you liked my description! It's something I tend to be pretty heavy on so it's comforting to know that it comes across well.

It had to be Peter at the end, because no one else would have come back for Lily, no matter how desperate things got. In my mind Peter hadn't turned yet during this one shot, but he was debating internally which side was the correct one.

Thank you SO SO much!

~Cassie


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