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Review:patroni says:
What a great chapter!

1. The Quidditch Match was brilliant! Given that you'd already written a quidditch chapter, I was wondering if you'd be able to make this one stand out and you did. I was reading wide eyed and with bated breath as you described Trista's play.

2. I loved the bit with June and Albus, and June's story. Given my ongoing obsession with wandlore (I've pretty much memorised everything Rowling said about wands on Pottermore!), I really appreciate the information you provided about June's wand and the thought and research that went into it. It explains so much but you've also used carefully. That is, it isn't some deus ex machina, inserted to suddenly convince us that June was actually a genuis all the while.

3. The prank! I'm really looking forward to watching it unfold. And I wonder if Albus knows what June was upto with the password and spoke the wrong one on purpose.

Congratulations on having nearly finished with this story. With one chapter to go, I just wanted to thank you for a lovely, lovely time!

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