Hi ellie! So, this chapter, was like, amazing. What you write usually is, but I really love the length of it, becoz I just can't enough of Being Summer.
So, first of, they're back in Hogwarts! Oh, how I love my Hoggy-Warty. I'm glad its the scene of action again.
And this chapter, jeez, hysterical, angry wombats much? I agree with whatever Jack said, Penny and Dom should've noticed Summer's problems, they're supposed to be besties.
Penny, darling, though I'm glad to see you again, I would just like to ask: how dare you say Summer has judged you and hasn't been supportive. I feel that encouraging you to leave a relationship with an 'abusive monster' is pretty darn supportive.
And Dom, glad to see you to, but could you be a bit less of a controlling drama queen. Somehow, I feel like abusing you a lot right now. But face it, no relationship is perfect, and you were being horrible to Conner. This was bound to happen.
Um, excuse me, but Fred, and perceptive? Have pigs flown or what?
And finally, Summer. There's this one thing that has been nagging me for the entire duration of reading this chapter. The number of times Summer and 'pregnancy' were mentioned in the same sentence, I have an inkling of a plunny for a sequel. Am I right?
This reminds me, best of luck with your new stories. Bet you anything they'd be great, coz you are writing them, and I will definitely R & R.
Plz dont update too soon, because I really am dreading the end of this story.
Flowers and virtual cookies,
P.s. So, yeah... A bit of shameless self-advertisement. There's this new one-shot of mine, which is not only my first fanfic, but also my first completed story. I would love you if you checked it out, and graced me with your expert critiques. It's called Antagonist.