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Review:Jchrissy says:
This is a really lovely one shot. I'm thinking maybe this was the start of their relationship? And if so, I think it's a really new way to set them off together. I totally see Hogwarts age when it comes to pairing these characters together, but the idea of that not happening until their five year reunion is very different and fun!

I think you really had a good grasp on her emotions and showed those really well!

This made me very curious as to both of their backgrounds with one another, she had obviously always had feelings for him, so was this him finally returning them?

I think the feeling of being alone in this kind of situation could be a really realistic one, especially with countless classmates already seeming to have found their 'other half.'

Great joB!

Author's Response: Yep this is the start of their relationship. i wanted to capture the emotions of feeling alone and feeling like you are being looked at because you are not with someone already and everyone else you know is. I'm really glad that the emotions showed through for you. I'm thinking about writing another oneshot about this from his pov to clear up how he knew where she is and such like that. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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