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Review:starryskies55 says:

Yeah, so I'm not patient, but I did pick the title! :D And then forgot it a couple of times, so well done for remembering :P

"I really should have introduced him in first year," she sighs, shaking her head. That would be best if she wants to talk to me about him. I think I love Louis' narration more than Ciaran, if that is even possible. He is so funny! I loved everything about this chapter, from Louis referring to Ciaran as Bright Eyes to him looking at his bum, to Lucy being lovely and wow, Sam, you've completely surpassed yourself! I'd also almost forgotten how good you are at description, after reading so much of Ciaran. Oooh, on a similar note, can we see Louis paint? Preferably paint Ciaran? TA.

It's amazing, and I really want to hear more from Louis soon. Please! And Lucy! And Jack also!


Thanks for posting it! ;)


- Jenny

Author's Response: I love that you're not patient. When people push for more, I actually write. I love it! :D

I did not think that was possible, but yay. I think. There will be a chapter where Louis is painting. What will it be? You'll have to wait and see... ;)

The next chapter will be Jack's POV. :)

Thank you for the title and for reviewing. Love you, too, Jenny.


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