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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Aw this was rather cute! I love James/Lily and thought that this was a great addition to the archives for them! I only spotted one small mistake and it was here, "She its up with a start" its should be sits. But other than that everything was perfect. I loved the whole idea and how James decides to give Lily a sandwhich in secret just so he can hopefully get a smile out of her. I thought the whole idea behind this oneshot was really sweet and I feel that having a secret smile as your challenge would be really well, challenging but you managed to pull it off wonderfully in this oneshot! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Aww thank you :) Yeah, I know about that little typo lol, I just haven't gone and edited it yet. I will be doing a major revamping on all my stories though :) I thought this was really cute too 'cause he got to be sneaky, and for once he was doing it himself. I do want a banner for this, but if I had one I'd want one of Lily's smile, but it would be full of sandwich so it'd prolly be hard to find lol. I'm so happy you liked it, it was a challenge but was such a pay off, I think this is my best work so far that's at least finished :) Thank you for the review!

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