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Review:Aether says:
Hi, I'm here from the review swap. Wonderful one-shot! I'm sort of curious about what Scorpius was thinking that night, too. Maybe he'd been building up the courage the whole time, just for that moment with Rose. This was really well-written and sweet. Also, it's very original to see such an angsty Rose Weasley. I'm used to seeing her as really outgoing.

I was sort of put-off by the "members of the opposite sex" thing in the first paragraph of the one-shot. It seemed like a bit of an awkward and strange thing to say, though I guess maybe Rose is a bit awkward in this story?

Otherwise, though, the flow of this story is really excellent, and I saw no grammar errors either. This is very well-written. Great job!

Aether

Author's Response: Yeah that bit is rather awkward now that I think about it. I may go back and change it so its not so awkward. I'm thinking about writing another oneshot about this that would be from his pov though i'm not sure yet. thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you liked it!

~Slytherinchica08~


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