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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
OH I loved this! I loved the narration of this story as it was different from what I have normally read. I think you did a wonderul job with Hannah and thought she was very sweet in wishing for the night to not end so she would not have to part with Neville. You did a great job with such a short piece to get her emotions across and also telling us a story, that gives us extra information, such as how long the pub has been hers and such. I thought it was all very sweet and well written. I loved your ending with the small mentions of a white velvet box which only makes me think that he is going to propose to her which is just so cute and sweet that he would do so before he has to go back to Hogwarts. Really this was a great oneshot! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hello, thanks for coming by!

I'm so glad you liked this! I don't write much fluff, so it was nice to get away from my usual dark subject matter and try something light and fun. I've also wanted to write Neville/Hannah for a while now, and this challenge presented a nice opportunity to try that out. It's great that you liked the emotion and the ending with the proposal, too :)

Thanks for your sweet review!

-Amanda


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