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Review:ValWitch21 says:
OOH. What went through my head, clicking on a WIP story that only had one chapter? I'm currently actually bouncing on my chair waiting for the next chapter now, and trust me it's not a good idea for my ego. But whatever. Too late now.

So. Why do I like this?

Well, because it's amazing, duh. Tantalising plot (but that might also be the summary's fault), loveable characters in just one chapter and, for the crazy person I am, flawless grammar and spelling!

Toss into the equation that I love your Rose as much as I enjoyed reading Nathalie - but that goes without saying - and you are going to have to face me every time from now on. You have no idea what you got yourself into. Update soon please?

10/10. Definitely. :)

Author's Response: I often do that myself, but I'm certainly glad you clicked on River Sea! I'm pretty proud of this story, I did work hard on it :p

Ohmygosh, seriously? I can't believe it! Yeah, the summary hints of a plot, but that won't be officially coming in until the second or third chapter. Thank you! A couple of days after this was validated, I cheerfully went back and wrote down every single mistake I could see and fixed everything, so that's probably why it looks absolutely flawless :)

Did you? I was so worried people wouldn't like Rose for the way she overreacted on the boat, but that was just the way she was so I'm glad you liked both her and Nathalie :) You'll be the first I say this to, but luckily for you, some of the next chapter is held through Rose's eyes - more is through Albus', but Rose's was essential for part of it. Definitely I'll update soon! I'm almost finished the next chapter, so expect to see it soon :D Thanks a bunch for such a sweet review!


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