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Review:the bear says:
Hey! I really enjoyed reading this. It's a great story and you write really well.
Why do you call the suitemates? They shared a dormitory at Hogwarts -is that what you mean? Very sad, that the two of them died. That's got to be really, really hard for all of their friends. And in such a short span of time. Good to see them sticking together.
I don't really understand why Rose has to be so defensive about saving Scorpius. She's a healer and did her job -it's what was expected of her and she should always try her best, no matter if she knows the victim or not.
I think it's cool that Sienna turned out to be more than the stereotypical stupid, crazy ex. I kinda like her. I hope her and Scorpius can really still be friends.
Griffin's still into all the pureblood stuff? Doesn't that make it really hard for him to work with other people? Just take Carolyn -her dad's a Muggle. And it didn't seem as though he avoided her because of it.
I like how you portray your characters and their relationships with one another -Rose and Hugo and Al. Her girlfriends. Going out. All that normal-life-stuff.
I wonder how Rose would/will react to an explanation and/or apology from Scorpius. I'm glad to hear she's over it (and I hope very much that she doesn't just say that. Seriously. Three years is a long time.)
So -when will they meet? ...I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Very well written and I like it! ;) Thanks

Author's Response: OMG I love this entire review. You just made my night :))
I call them suitemates, but yeah it's the same as the dormmates. In coming chapters, I'll show Scorpius banding together with his other suitemates in light of what has happened with Anthony and Phillip.
I don't know if I explained clearly about why Rose is so defensive about saving Scorpius. She just didn't want Scorpius to know because she didn't want him to feel obliged to owe her something. Also, she thinks that he's still disgusted with her from the Hogwarts days.
I sorta went with a different route with Sienna. I was first expecting her to be an ex that was barely in the story, but I just sorta got attached to her, so I made her into a bigger part in the story.
Griffin only really speaks to Carolyn when needed. I haven't really delved into that relationship yet, but Griffin doesn't like anybody who he sees as blood traitors or as mudbloods, i.e. the Potters and Weasleys. He's sorta an ass to everybody else besides Scorpius.
You'll see in a few chapters (I'm not quite sure when since I haven't written that far into the future) Rose and Scorpius actually beginning to speak to each other amicably. I think it'll be a while until Scorpius formally apologizes to her, but that's because Scorpius is still nervous about Rose not being able to fully forgive him. But she really has fully forgiven him. Like you said, three years is a very long time to hold a grudge.
Actually, they just meet again in the next chapter that was just validated, so you should read it and review!!! PLEASE. And seriously, this review made my night :)

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