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Review:Jchrissy says:
Wow Miss Branwen, you just gave me the entire body chills/shivers.

The most haunting part about it is, you don't say exactly what happens to Dorcas, but we know she doesn't live through this war so it isn't hard to guess.

The image you created is so dark, and with such few words... it's amazing. I just want to break the mirror for her and rescue her from whatever room they've locked her in. Your imagery in this is so alive, the idea of her huddling in a corner that isn't really corner, trying to avoid looking into the mirror, is really terrifying.

I could literally feel my heart start racing when the door creaked open, I just wanted her to pull out her wand and fight. And who was there to make her think at first she'd been saved? My only idea is Severus..

Thanks for giving me my morning dose of creepy ;)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :) As weird as it may be, I'm really glad you had that reaction - it was definitely what I was going for, but I'm still getting into this dark creepy niche, so I was a bit concerned. (Though, aren't I always?)

♥ Thank you for the review.

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