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Review:Smile :) says:
I love this story!!! I really like the characters (especially Al and Piper) and they are very well developed and interesting. You have done an extremely good job creating Owen especially and actually making him a person that Nick would trust and open up to (and I love that he is a Hufflepuff too!!).

I also really like how you are continuing the story in third person, as the nice blips of Al's and other character's stories which are not quite as depressing as Nick's are refreshing. But she had still better be alright!!! I like this story because although you have a darker plot, you always manage to insert in some little happyish thing at the right time to make sure it does not get too angsty and depressing. Good balance :)

I cannot wait for an update (I am especially excited for their evil plot to get the housecup to continue. Muahahaha I love Lottie and Thomas). Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review, Smile! :)

I'm really glad you like it. I've tried really hard on these characters to make them seem real- they all have their faults- and I've tried not to make everyone seem like perfect halves to someone else. And isn't Owen fabulous?

Yes. It's in third person because the focus is going to stray away from Nick (eep), but trust me, there is plenty of darkness to come. As for her well-being ... I cannot give anything away. :)

My humour as a person tends to be the slightly awkward and random humour in the story; plus, even though all the darkness is swirling around them ... they're still kids. Life still goes on, and funny things happen. :)

Ah ... updating ... erm, I shall get on that. I think I should have it done soon. Thanks for the amazing review, though!

Ellie


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