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Review:james4life says:
I enjoyed this story :-)
I really belive that your writing dramatically improved as the story went on. At the start the story was all about how physical they were, one aspect of them and its as if ur writing mirrored that, but as it went on nd their relationship developed, grew and deepened.. So did your writing and i think you described things much better too :-)
I do think you described their more intimate moments very well and got the passion and urgency accross acuratly though:-)
I loved the ending, how they got together, the last chapter before the epilogue was deffinatly my favourite!
Well done :-)

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