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Review:Siriuslover177 says:
Wow, I cannot believe all that Petunia said... well, I can, but it's still horrible!
And when Lily tared up Severus' letter, I thought that was really sad, and when she said he'd been coming to the flower shop all the time, I really do feel bad for him, at least she is giving him a shot now.
And the new, laid back Lily, I cannot wait to see how that goes.
I do feel bad for her though, because of how Alex called her ugly, and now that is how she views herself as.
This was a very emotional chapter, but a very good one.
It is a little confusing though, because in the beginning you were talking about Lily going to Scarlet's house the last week of break, and now the train is leaving tomorrow, and she is at her own house?
So that part threw me off, but everything else was spot on.
Great job(:

~Sarah
Xxxx

Author's Response: ooh I can see how that would be unclear. I meant the train taking her to London to scarlet's. I guess I should make that a little more clear. Anyways, this WAS a very emotional chapter and i'm glad that came across. This was one of the first parts of the story I wrote so I have a soft spot for it.

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