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Review:Allison says:
I thought you did a really good job with the Quidditch commentary. I find writing Quidditch is rather difficult, and I understand why JKR thought it was difficult to write - there's only so much to say, you know? Your commentating kept my attention and was informative, yet not over-the-top with information. Good job!

And hooray that Scorpius is no longer upset with Rose. And I'm so thrilled that she acknowledged him as her boyfriend without any prompting or feelings that she was obligated to call him that. I think it came across that she genuinely felt that she likes him enough and cares about him enough to want to put that title on what they have. Very exciting! And of course I'm very excited to see how all of Rose's cousins react to seeing her and Scorpius together. It's one thing to know that two people are dating, but seeing them in person, together, is very different somehow.

Excellent chapter! I'm sad that this story is coming to and end, but I'm anxiously awaiting the sequel! Now off to review the other chapters I haven't gotten around to yet - sorry about that! I moved to another state to attend grad school, so I'm still settling into my apartment and to a new routine. :)

Author's Response: Agreed in full. I mean, I can wax poetic about football and enjoy it a lot, but pretty much the only people who enjoy it with me are other football fans. I don't think that many people are drawn to CINAS for the Quidditch action, so I really wanted to make it accessible... which took a lot of writing and rewriting. :P I'm glad it worked in the end!

No worries about not reviewing yet - I know how you feel (I'm also starting grad school/moving, though thankfully I haven't even had to change cities), and besides, you spoil me with all of your amazing reviews. I'm beyond lucky to have a reader like you.

Thank you for a lovely review. :)

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