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Review:eternalangel says:
What an amazing piece of writing. There is so much that you accomplished in such a small amount of words. Your descriptions and word choice in this are delectable. I particularly found the opening and closing lines to be the most impactful as I assume was the intention. Good work on that.

I also want to comment on just how well you captured Severus Snape's state of mind in the moment he found out Lily had been murdered. Though Severus's name is never mentioned in this, the reader can clearly see that it is his POV that we are reading. I think you did an excellent job showing the panoply of emotions a person can go through whilst in the midst of grief. This made him a complex and realistic character. It's hard to believe that you managed to do this under 700 words, but you did and I applaud you for it.

This piece also reminded me of Edgar Allan Poe. I'm not sure if that was your intent, but if it was, excellent work.

Overall, this was an incredible piece of writing. Keep up the fantastic work!

eternalangelkiss

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