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Review:rogovjm says:
This is definitely different than anything I've ever read before. Azkaban has definitely been explained before but I've never seen it through the eyes of a prisoner explained in this way. It was very spooky but in a really cool mysterious sort of way.

In the girl's (I assume it was a girl) flashback it says that she said Expelliarmus and it killed the guy the way that Avada Kedavra does. How did that happen?

Other than that, I had no questions and I thought it was really interesting.

Good job, 10/10

-jess

Author's Response: Hey! I was trying to make it as original as possible, so naturally I had to make my character (yes, Georgia is a girl :P) the prisoner.

In her flashback, she doesn't directly kill him with Expelliarmus- the spell knocks him back and he dies from his fall down the stairs. I didn't want to make the story too graphic, so I'm sorry it wasn't so clear- I will try and edit it a bit now.

Thanks so much for the review! :)



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