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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi, I wandered over here from the review tag. I really like this story! You do a great job of capturing Sirius's emotions with just a few words.

I like the inclusion of little details like the "rubbery grip" and "vibrating war cries" of his motorcycle.

If I have one critique, it's that I didn't get that Sirius was reading a note at Peter's hiding place until I saw your author's note at the end. If you could add a sentence at the beginning to indicate his location then I think the story would be even better. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I'll have to see if I can get that in anywhere, the 500 word challenge has to be exactly 500 words. So I'll have to cut something out.. Hmm I'll definitely look into it!

Thanks so much for your awesome review!!!

Jami


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