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Review:academica says:
Ooh, this looks good! :) (And I get first review!)

I've read the Snape-meets-new-teacher plot line before, but I've never seen it introduced this way. I'm a huge Snily shipper, so it definitely caught my eye. I really like the range of emotions I already see with your Snape; he seemed almost innocent in his hoping and wishing that the new teacher would actually, somehow be Lily, and then he instantly slipped back into his usual cold and callous demeanor when those hopes were dashed. In my experience, Snape can be tough to grasp, so kudos to you on doing so well thus far!

I like your dialogue and description, too. Neither are overly complicated and they do a good job of setting the tone even in this short prologue. In the same way, the flow works well for me here, too.

Lovely job! Looking forward to the next chapter!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Oh hi!
Your review is so nice - I keep reading it over again and blushing. :P
I'm a weirdo so I read a lot of Snape/Hermione fics and I think that's really helped with my characterisation of him.
Next chapter in queue now! :D
- Ellie


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