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Review:Georgia Weasley says:
There's so much I liked about this chapter that it's hard for me to start. Your original characters were realistic and creative, as always. Heckie-the-money launderer and Anita-the-translator, while minor characters, jump off the page as you describe mannerisms, accents, and body language. Rose is just brilliant here, too. She's gotten quite obsessed with this case, and you reveal the reason behind her fixation so well. I loved how you brought in Ron and his saying about temporary danger helping to secure permanent safety. He would definitely know. I was terrified that Ramses would be gone when Rose and Scorpius returned to the hotel. I felt the anxiety you built into Rose. Excellent job. And of course, I love Scorp. "Just go". He knows her so well, doesn't he? Also, the description of Montain and the details of the scenery painted a detailed picture for us. I could see it in my mind. Great chapter. I'd be jealous, but I love you too much. Mwah! ~GW

Author's Response: Oh I'm glad you liked it! I love characters, they're my favorite part about writing. People and their interactions (and dialogue haha). It's interesting to contrast some New York personalities and accents with Rose's British. The New York is easier for me to write naturally, I think. And New York scenery is fun - I've been there several times so I can picture it pretty well when I write it. Ramses is not in danger just now, fortunately. Rose's activities are going to bring her to people's attention soon though. Thank you so much for reviewing! Love you girl!

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