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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
The characterization in this story seems interesting. I like the way Sirius is depicted, but Asilin seems to come off as a Mary Sue. The plot is intersting, but needs to be pieced together better, and description helps that, and this story needs more description. I do like the overall sense of the story, its fun, witty, and creative, a very uplifting beat that I enjoy. But it does need some work and editing. I recommend a beta who can help with description and plot as well as grammar.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'll definitely do some editing.

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