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Review:Jchrissy says:
I feel so sad for Rowena. I couldn't image being in her situation, poor girl. I think your imagery in this is wonderful, it's more emotional than physical, but I think that really makes the piece stronger.

I am learning that I have a soft spot for founders fics! Anyway, I do think that more of Loren's motivation on why he wants Rowena so and why he's taking this to the extreme would be good. Like, did he spend his entire life loving her? Could he not stand anyone saying no to him, and that's what fueled his need to posses her? But, I also may have just really liked this and am now sneakily trying to get you to write more of it *blushing*!

I think you handled the King and Queen very well, they were diplomatic yet clearly loving parents. And the Tiara... already ruining lives, it seems.

Loved this one shot, darling! You are really making want to like D/H so I can read Rule Breaker!!!

Author's Response: Hi Jami!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this! I'm really glad that you liked the story. I've never been sure of my Founders' skills, so this is the only Founders story I've ever read. To sort of explain Loren better: you got it right on your second guess. He hated that she rejected him and he didn't want to take no for an answer. I'll make that clearer when I edit it. :] And if I ever write more Founders stuff, I'll let you know, haha. For now, it's not planned, but if I ever get an awesome idea, I'll definitely tell you. Thank you again for reviewing this! I really appreciate it. :D

Also, you don't have to love Dramione to read "Rule Breaker"! It's really non-cliche and I've heard that it MAKES people like Dramione, haha. Maybe it could do that for you. ;] But really, you don't have to read it if you don't want to. That's absolutely fine. :]

Thanks again for your review!

--Emily

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