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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I really like how you took this first chapter to explain to us how it was that he came across superheros and how he ended up wanting to become like one and help people rather than be like his father. One thing I was confused with during this chapter was Theo's age because at the beginning I assumed (I know horrible of me) that he was older probably in his twenty's but then towards the end you mention that he has a nanny and I can't imagine a twenty something wizard having a nanny.. I would think a house elf would be more likely for him to have at that age. Really over all this first chapter was a great introduction into your Theodore and I look forward to reading more! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Yeah, Theodore is seven and running away. I put his age in the chapter note thing underneath the title. :)

Thank you, I'm glad you like my Theodore, because he's my favorite Hogwarts era character (besides Harry of course :P).

Sam.


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