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Review:StormThief17 says:
Hey, its me again!

So it looks like they have discovered a boggart...I wonder if they'll be able to get rid of it! And now of course you've got me wondering why Salazar is afraid of the flames. I think you're definitely keeping everyone in character! Salazar just gets more interesting the more I read! I think its great that you're keeping him consistent with his scorn for muggle-borns, but also allowing us to see new sides of him. I also just love Helga. She's such a Hufflepuff! She's so sweet, but also strong. I think the plot's coming along nicely--you've introduced some conflicts with the boggart as well as Salazar's prejudice and both character's secretive natures. Its a little slow in developing, but not a boring slow. I think if you do pick up the pace just a little it would be great, but you're doing just fine right now. Anyway, I'm really enjoying your story! I'll be closing my review thread soon due to school starting, but I'll continue reviewing, because this deserves it :) Another brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: Hi StormThief! Thanks for coming!

I'm so glad everyone was staying in character. I was a little worried about Salazar in this, but I'm glad he's still interesting! The more I write him, the more I uncover new sides to him. It's really fun, actually :) And Helga, oh my goodness. She's very dear to my heart; I'm so proud of her, and I'm glad you like her too!

I'm going to try and get some things happening in the next couple of chapters, but hopefully the plot won't get too boring until then. If it does, feel free to let me know :P But I did try to have multiple things going on at once, so it would feel like the plot was moving a little more.

I totally know what you mean about school: I've actually just closed my thread as well for that reason. But yeah, definitely stick around for updates! I'm working on ch. 5 right now, so hopefully it will be up before too much longer :) Thanks again for the sweet review, and I am so glad you're enjoying the story!

--Maggie


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