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Review:daretodream says:

Well, Ferris Nott is a great big jerk isn't he? (I have a list of other words for him as well, but seeing as they're not review appropriate I will follow Millie's example and keep my thoughts to myself :D)

Seriously though, who breaks up with a girl and has a new one by TUESDAY. That's not only mean, that's flat out ambitious. And whoever the girl is well, you can imagine my thoughts about her as well. Can anybody say rebound? I can.

I'm already in love with James Potter, my love affair with him is a big problem. One that I only see getting worse as this story goes on, really.

I'm super glad that her ex wasn't James. Again with the originality and breaking all the stereotypes, I love it. But seriously, had her ex been James it would have been a classic get back together story. I like this one better, it's new and different.

Berkley still cracks me up. I love that he isn't afraid to tell Millie exactly how he feels, and he doesn't sugarcoat it either. Plus he doesn't like Sherri, which I find amusing. I absolutely died at some of his sarcastic comments though, like about Millie being a klepto. Perfect.

Sherri. She's one of those characters who everybody has a real life counterpart of. That girl you talk to sometimes when it is convenient so you don't get lonely. Perfect.

Once again, I loved this chapter :D Amazing job 10/10


Author's Response: *waves back* Hi there! Thanks again for reviewing this! Ferris is definitely a big jerk (amongst other words that we cannot use in reviews). I'm finding that a lot of my Ravenclaw characters have some Slytherin qualities in them, which is interesting to me because I guess there's a fine line between the two houses if you think about it, and Ferris exhibits this. He's calculating. And he disregards other's feelings if it gets him what he wants. Whether it's a rebound or not, only time will tell.
Aww I'm glad that you like James! It's a bit hard to write two stories with James characters and make a distinction between them so I'm glad you like him! I do too :)
It's really funny, I think, how so many people had thought James was going to be the ex; I hadn't even considered such a thing while writing it - it just wasn't a part of the story I wanted to tell. And I'm glad that you think I'm so original! It makes me feel so awesome!
Everyone loves Berkley, haha. I think the two of them are at the point in their friendship where they just tell it how it is; they're so comfortable with one another.
Sherri! Ahhh I love that girl and judging by some reviews I've gotten I think I'm in the minority here haha. But she has a purpose and great qualities and I felt that Millie needed at least one female friend - even if they weren't besties.
Thank you so much for leaving me such a lovely review! Everything that you say is very sweet and makes me smile :D

~Jess :D

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