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Review:VampireMaidenPhoenix says:
What? Just... what? ... WHAT?!

You can't... I don't... Just. what?

I don't know what to say. Um... It was written beautifully, definitely. I felt sort of detached, reading, but not because I didn't like or understand what I was reading, but I kind of felt like Rose was detached from everything. And even though I am not convinced that I totally understood just what happened, I sort of like it like that, I think. It's hard to say whether adding more concrete details would improve the story or take away from the emotion... Anyway, I'm favoriting this.

Author's Response: My thoughts exactly. I wrote it and I still can't believe what I composed!

Thank you - I'm glad you thought it was beautifully written. It's interesting that you say you felt detached because Rose did - that's definitely a reaction/interpretation that I haven't heard and I like it! (If you read some of my review responses to previous reviews, I think it will give you some insight into the happenings of the piece without me giving you a 20,000 word explanation - I'm wordy, you know). I write stream of consciousness and I rarely, if ever, edit, so I haven't considered concrete details - I'm don't normally give concrete details in such a raw, emotional piece like this, but it's definitely something to consider next go-round. Thanks so much for the fabulous review! I definitely appreciate it! I hope you enjoyed the read! :)

Shelby



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