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Review:helpwillalwaysbegiven says:
I love Al! You portray him so well! I find that female authors tend to make male narrators sound/act very feminine, but you're doing excellent. Albus' actions and thoughts seem believable and very masculine. So, a job well done to you!

I also like the relationship between James and Al, in this chapter especially. I think you depicted their brotherly relationship perfectly.

Lucy's a total sweetheart as well and I really like her independence! I thought for sure that she was going to be invited to a Wotter holiday party, or that Al was going to bump into her in Diagon Ally since it was mentioned that she was staying with Alice who lives in/near Diagon Ally. Alas, none of that happened, but I mustn't get my hopes up. Al's gotta see her atleast once over the break to give her his gift... right?!

I just started reading this story today and I'm already done reading all the chapters here. I love it and I will definitely be following it closely. Keep up the amazing work! Hope to see an update soon :)

~ Jenny

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the lovely review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Have you read the 'Animal Magnetism' the original story that this comes from? You can access it on my page. This is just that story from Al's perspective, so it might make more sense if you read AM first :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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