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Review:Darla says:
Hi there. Congratulations on reaching 30 chapters! I'm just as happy as you are that the story has gone this far! I just don't want it to end:)

Oh and regarding your response to my review of Misery Loves Company, it was my birthday when you posted that chapter which was like a Birthday surprise for me:)

Without further ramblings from my never ending pile of rambles, here is your review:

The final task! I couldn't believe it was finally here! And is it bad that I was super happy when Hannah found out that Fred and Delilah had been arguing? No? Ok good because Fred just needs to stop being a dummy. But I'm glad Hannah is giving it right back to him by flirting up a storm with James.

Sophie is just so sweet. I wish I could put her in my pocket and take her home:) And I loved James' little slip up in the beginning. It was the perfect awkward moment and those are my absolute favorite things in the whole world. He sort of became my new favorite character after the "Private Tree" incident. He totally reminded me of my older brother with the way he acted.

The last task was beautifully crafted. I thought it was a really good mix of challenges from the magical world that needed various skills, both magical and not, to succeed. Poor Albus is scared of water, but I totally know how he feels. Water is scary. I was kind of sad that Albus didn't win partly because I'm a Gryffindor and I wanted him to win but I'm happy that Teddy won even though Emmy still won't give him a chance. Everyone is just kind of sad, except Sophie and Albus:)They're moving in together! Yay!

You didn't have any grammatical errors as far as I know butI think you might've messed up with the scores because three of the champions scores were 180.

Once again you did a fabulous job of making it all flow together really well and giving all the characters life! Keep up the good work darlin, you're doin great:)

Author's Response: Thank you Darla! I'm so happy you could be here along with me! haha.. I don't want it to end either! Well I have the sequel (eventually) and TCF but I still don't want this one to end!

Well then, happy belated birthday! *throws confetti and sings very badly*

ahah.. I should make a blog called "ramblings from my never ending pile of rambles" but I don't even keep up with the forums blog I have now so it probably would never get filled :p

I know! I was such a bundle of emotions writing it.. I mean, I had this plan from chapter one but I'm the worst planner in the world so I never thought things would make it this far! NO! it's wonderful that you were happy! Because Hannah's brain is definitely over exaggerating Fred and Delilah talking to eachother. ahah.. Hannah and James was definitely just an excuse for her to live out a childhood crush :p Really Fred, he's a budding Quidditch star... I don't think he's going to go for his little brother's friend who's still at Hogwarts ;)

Sophie! I love writing her :) she got to be the boss here! She still gets embarrassed about everything, though. And James just had to make things awkward.. because he's James. and his private tree.. I'd love to see what kind of things living in the forest probably attacked him for that one :p

yay! I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of problems actually saying what I was visualizing so I am happy to hear that things worked out okay in the end. I had this idea of a triathlon, and I knew I wanted it to be swim, fly, duel, but I didn't know how on earth I was going to execute it. haha.. Albus' fear of water comes from James tormenting him as a kid.. poor guy. I was sad that Al didn't win too, but he really got off to a rocky start and Teddy wanted it more. As far as Emmy.. well I can't spoil anything quite yet :)

And yay for Al and Sophie!

*facedesk* I wouldn't doubt I messed up the math :p I'm so bad at math. I will fix that, thank you!

And thank you for the lovely review! I have a new chapter of TCF going up soon, and then 31 of this one just needs to be edited and it will go up after :) Thank you, again for all of your support! *hugs* ttyl!

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