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Review:IceCubism says:
Oh my gosh. You had me there.

I thought my heart was breaking when I read that part where James kissed Annabelle! (There aren't enough exclamation marks in the world for the exclamation I felt).

I was thinking: Nooo, James, please don't break Lise's heart! I know she's been really cold to you in the past but this is not the way to treat her! You're such a jerk! You're supposed to be in love with her, sweet and giving her her happy ending! Not cheat on Lise!

Then I heaved a sigh of relief and let out a breath I didn't know I was holding when I read that James was just trying to make Lise jealous. Sigh.

Dear James, this is honestly not the way to make your girl friend - and love of your life - jealous.

But I was so glad she met her father! I mean, he's been a worse jerk than James - obviously - but I'm so happy for Lise they patched up! Yay! And everyone's happy again (except for Lise until later).

And I love that line (cliche, but that's James' and Lise's romance isn't it? Pardon me, I read ahead before coming back to review. Couldn't resist the temptation.) where Lise's father wanted to kill James for hurting his daughter!

Aw, it's just such a heart-wrenching moment when the father shows his love and stands up for his daughter (LOL).

Anyway, great job on this chapter again! (And I'd love to have an explanation of James' actions in this chapter - ahem, well, the you-know-what incident with Annabelle - in the missing moments story. I really want to know James' feelings at that moment - laugh - and he'd better provide an excellent justification of why he'd want to hurt Lise. Again. Even if it's not intentional.)

Well, thank you again for writing this fantastic story! :) I loved reading it!

Author's Response: WOW. The length of this review. I'm so flattered, omg.

And wow, I'm glad I shocked you, that's what I was aiming for! James is a complicated guy though, which is what makes him such a fab character to write... it's so easy to create a bit of drama with him.

But I'm sure James is blushing right now... he's feeling like a fool now you've put him in his place ;)

Yeah, the whole Lise bumping into her Dad thing was really random, I didn't even plan it but it just sort of snuck into the chapter on it's own accord and I'm glad it did. I feel that a proper Dad is a really important person to have in your life, my Dad really is to me no matter how close I am with my Mum.

But anyway, I totally agree! Cliche, but in a neccessary way :)

And that's a good suggestion! I can't promise I'll write that anytime soon, but I will keep it in mind because I think it would make for an interesting chapter in Extra Time :)

thanks for the lovely review and I hope you check out some of my other fics and enjoy them equally!

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