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Review:rosie beaumont says:
I would have really liked to see more of Snape throughout your story. He is barely mentioned and when he is it is very briefly. There hasn't been very much of a development between his and Beth's relationship after 19 chapters.
Regardless, your writing is fantastic and I'm enjoying your story immensely.

Author's Response: It was very hard, keeping Snape out of this story as much as I did, and especially withholding on a lot of the actual relationship, other than just... conversations. You know? But I do feel that it's realistic to Snape's character, especially after Lily, to keep him out of a romantic relationship. And he does crop up much more in the story later on, I promise! This is Beth's story, but of course Snape is a very large part of it.

Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review on this chapter! I'm so happy you did, and happy to see that you're enjoying the story, too. I hope to see you back very soon!

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