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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh this chapter has some major action going on here! I was sucked in right from the beginning as I always am with your work! If I'm being honest, I love this bit from canon as well and thought that you did a great job with it. I'm excited to see what will happen now that Snape knows Remus is a werewolf and such.

I found one small mistake in this chapter and that was here, "but know that it would take too long to get there and back." know should be knew.

Altogether, this was another wonderful chapter! I'm really enjoying this story and love where you're taking it! The one thing I really like about this chapter is that while its a rather long chapter, it never really feels like it is. The action and flow just keep moving the story forward and I'm always exctied to get to the next line and see what else you have in store for us. I was so excited to see some more talking between Beth and Snape in this chapter and I'm excited to see how things will continue to play out for these two characters. Particularly in this chapter, I felt that you did an absolutely wonderful job with James. I loved his reactions to fleeing to help Snape, to finding out Beth can't transform, to yelling at Sirius in the end. Again it was really another great chapter and I look forward to reading the next!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Yes! This was really my first foray into writing action, this chapter -- and there's another chapter later on in this story, too, where I tried to do a bit of it. ;) I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! (And thank you for finding that mistake -- I've edited this story so many times, and still things like that slip by me!)

I'm honestly so glad you're enjoying this story so much, Erica. I know that you don't HAVE to read it, and it really does mean so much to me that you've still stuck around! I love James in this chapter, too. ;) Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me such a sweet review!! ♥

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