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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

And I'm back with another review for you that I should have given a while ago! Forgive me! Real life is a real bummer you know!
Anyway, I was really fascinated with how you had the Archive system, I had never given it any thought, just sort of shuddered at the thought of so much parchment and filing. Pansy seemed to be moving along slowly buy surely and I really liked the dynamics you put into all of her co-workers. Some are more
interesting than others and I don't know why but I'm really interested in seeing more of Felicity, just because she's so quiet. And this Cyril had better not become some horrible bully to Pansy, I wouldn't stand for it but I'm interested in knowing what the issue there is. You'll probably elaborate in future chapters, I'm assuming? I hope so!
I also want to see if Pansy can bridge that dangerous gap into getting a friend. Its going to be hard work and I can understand why she would have some trouble getting there. Who the friend will be is going to be pretty interesting for me and I hope they'll make it all right and Pansy can be who she wants to be.
As usual, a great read and I'll be back as soon as you post another chapter!
Until then!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving another great review! I'm glad that you liked the Archive system- I found it to be an interesting thing to write about because I've never been on the inside of a system like it (shush- don't tell).

I'm glad that you like her co-workers so far and don't worry- they will definitely be appearing in future chapters! Cyril definitely does have an issue with Pansy and I think it will be revealed in a future chapter (I haven't decided how, or if it will be revealed at all. But it probably will).

Pansy will certainly try to bridge the gap, though I won't guarantee that she'll have much success to begin with! Thanks once again for reading and reviewing and I'll try to post the next chapter as soon as possible.


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