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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Here with another review! =)

I really liked this chapter. I was annoyed, happy and excited all throughout. I was mostly annoyed with Rose and Miranda and the way that they acted. Although, Daniel and Albus weren't any better. Albus has really changed while under the influence of Daniel. I felt so horrible for Louis.

I really think that he's got it rough in this story so far. Here he is trying to just be him and he's got these girls and boys picking on him relentlessly. Two of which are his cousins and that adds to it in a horrible way.

I really liked Sammy and the Quidditch practice scenes. Louis and Nathan are a lot alike and I think you did a great job bringing out their characters more in this chapter.

The description that you use throughout the chapter is wonderful. I was able to picture everything so easily. I love how the plot is progressing and how the character development is still continuing. I also liked the pace of the chapter.

Keep up the awesome writing! I look forward to reading what will happen next!!! =)


Author's Response: Thank you :)

Louis is very much on the wrong end of things right now - and it's hard to argue that he's deserved a word of it - but that's kids for you: even if they're fundamentally good-natured, they'll spot differences a mile off.

I promise an actual plot soon, too.


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