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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Have I been acting like a giddy school girl for this or what? Yes. Yes, I have and I'm so glad that its here! I didn't know whether to laugh or to be saddened by Fleur's descriptions of how the Weasley family were treating her! It seemed like a big misunderstanding on some points but I could see where she had gone wrong on alot of parts. That thing with the chickens was hilarious!
I could understand how she was trying her best not to let it get to her but when she actually confessed her feelings to Bill, I went, "Aw!" because I don't think she deserved it, not really.
As I've said, I really do enjoy your portrayal of Fleur versus some of the others I've read. Oh, and that reminds me! I think in the second paragraph you said "Flour" instead of Fleur but that was all that I found, everything else was really excellent!
As usual! :D
I enjoyed the ending and the description of Shell Cottage that Bill revealed and Fleur's imagination of how life would be for them. You write them so perfectly for one another that I can't see them with anyone else! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter and your eventual description of the wedding! I'll be back as soon as you update again and on my end, my laptop will be fixed by the end of the month but I might be busy doing boring grown up stuff. :p
Until then!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello! Sorry it's taken me so very shamefully long to respond to your wonderful review, but I've only just returned from a two week trip to Spain! The next chapter will be posted shortly, so keep a lookout for it!

I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter and I'm flattered that you think I write Bill and Fleur very well! Thank you!

I'll fix that typo as soon as I can, thanks for pointing it out, thought don't you think "flour Delacour" has a certain ring to it?!


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