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Review:Elenia says:
Hey ^^

I always have weird feelings about this pairing. I don't really support it (Jily all the way) but I still find myself oddly fascinated by it. There were so many wondeful choises on your author page, but I still ended up picking this.

But I'm glad I did! Because this was a marvellous one-shot. I think this is maybe as much that could've happened between Sirius and Lily before she started a relationship with James, so I found this to be very believable.

I especially enjoyed all those little details you managed to slip into your writing and all those comparisions to a clock, the metaphors were really beautiful.

You did a good job with Lily's emetions! That must have been a hard time for her, how she lost her best friend and even though James tried to defend her, his arrogance didn't do him any good. It all must have been very confusing for Lily.

Sirius was very much in character too. I especially liked it how you didn't make him open up to Lily. Even though he realised she could see through the guards he had put up, he still refused to admit anything.

All in all, a very beautiful and whole one-shot! Well done! And thank you for all your work in the House Cup!

~Elenia

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