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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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I'm so glad to see another chapter here, and there's so many new developments I'm not really sure where to start...

First of all I realy liked the way the reationships between the "Marauders" are progressing. The part with Remus and his scars felt so similar to the Remus we know from the books and how he would react to the werewolf issue. Overall the boys seem like they can't realy enjoy being boys because events around the have forced them to grow up, much like the two wars in the books did to these characters and Harry as well.

It was also a very interesting take on the Black sisters, and the societal pressures that would come with being from their family. Belltrix seemed exactly what you would expect, looking to marry for weath and status rather than love. But I'm anxious to see how the Lucius/Narcissa plays out.

It was quite sad to see that Molly never got to be a mother, but she is still very effective in her role as a guardian for Regulus, who continues to be probably the most sympatetic character in the story.

Great job and I can't wait to read more!

-James

Author's Response: Hi James!

I'm glad to see you here for another chapter. :)

The Marauders are so much fun to write and I can't wait to write more of them as they grow up and mature. I really want to keep some of their canon similarities despite it being an AU, you know? I think that's important to me.

Yes, Cygnus's scenes, especially with Bellatrix and Narcissa will definitely be more political and about the upbringing of young women in this uppity society. I'm excited to write Lucius/Narcissa too. :)

I had a tough time deciding what to do with Molly. I wasn't sure if I wanted her to have children as well, but I felt like if she had her own children, she wouldn't be as focused on Regulus, or if she was, then she'd be neglecting her own children. It was hard for me to figure out a balance and so I made it that she's a childless mother, but with such a big motherly heart that of course she would take poor Reg under her wing.

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts. I really hope to find time to write the next chapter soon.


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