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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Muahahahah! (Evil laughter) Told you I'd be back! :) I'm just sorry it's taken me this long to get back to review this!

Sooo I pretty much love everything about this chapter. (Well, the whole story, really, but this chapter is AMAZING!) You really did a GREAT job here of setting the scene for the rest of the story. I absolutely LOVE the characterization of all three of the brothers, as well as Dominique. I love how Vic is just so girly (and anything BUT simple), and Dom contrasts with that wonderfully.

You did an absolutely OUTSTANDING job with the Tale of the Three Brothers! You made everything fit time-wise; them riding their horses and all, and I really like how you explained that each brother has his own goals/motives for choosing the gift that he chose.

Everything flowed beautifully, and (that I can remember), I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors either. Amazing first chapter, dear! 10/10.

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