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Review:Ashling586 says:
August Gryffindor Review Challenge:
To start off with I must say that I really like the idea of a Tonks and Charlie friendship. I find it fun and refreshing because I have not read any other fan-fiction stories about those two that weren't Romances, and of course they with other people.
You have caught my attention I must know what is going to happen next. Three missing treasures, that makes me think that someone has to be behind all of it and I just need to know who it is. The smaller mystery of what Parker's first name is, is also pretty neat. I am hoping for something truly embarrassing. I didn't notice any major grammar issues, but then again I will admit grammar is not my best subject. I felt that the chapter flowed well and the pacing was good. You did a great job setting up the scene and showing the animosity between Charlie and Parker.
Overall I think this was a great start to an interesting story and I hope that you write more soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.

Author's Response: Yeah. I love Tonks and Charlie, but I haven't found many there weren't romance either. :)

Mysteries are fun, I like that it has you thinking. There are three altogether... ;)

Thank you so much for reviewing. I've just posted chapter two if you are interested. :)


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