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Review:ohsayitaintsox3 says:
I went through about five or six search pages, passing literally a hundred or so stories until I found this one. And I must say I'm happy that I did because this story is a gem!

I am a sucker for well thought out and written characters and yours take the cake. Sarina is such a fierce woman and despite the circumstance, you make her seem so relatable (probably because I'm Filipino and we are the same way in terms of meddling families, gossiping, and knowing everyone). And Al, ohmy. He's, for lack of a better/more creative word, sexy. He's pretty much the male counterpart of Sarina and I expect their relationship or whatever it is at this point to be nothing short of a fun ride. The rest of your characters, like Sarina's family or her group of friends, all seem to have mini stories of their own, which I like as well. I think it complements your main characters and the story in general, instead of overshadowing it.

And I think your writing deserves praise of its own. What I like best of your story is that everything seems natural. From the characters to the conversation to the situations, none of it seems forced or expected. No unnecessary details or pointless ramblings in conversation. Qualities that I have come to realize are getting more and more difficult to find as authors try to find some sort of quirky gimmick to attract readers to their story.

So yeah, in short, I think your writing is brilliant and wonderful and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! :D

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