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Review:shadowycorner says:
This chapter was very good. There was a great combination of description and action and dialogue. Here, the description of Theo's working activities and such were vital because you also let us into his head and thoughts and I liked the conversation with his friend too.

I've noticed some spelling mistakes: Apparating, and it's always capitalised. Also you're mixing up your and you're. Your is possession, as in yours. You're is a shorter version for you are.

I wonder what happens next. It's never a good start to be running late on a date. I mean, lunch. :D

Author's Response: Silly mistakes, hits head, I guess thats what happens when I'm trying to write as much as possible in a month. I do know the difference between the two, just a silly mistake is all. But thank you for pointing that out. Yeah its never a good start when running late for a date, even if it's not a real date. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

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