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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hey there! I'm here with your requested review.

Firstly, I'd like to tell you that you have such a talent when it comes to description of physical aspects and emotional ones alike. I found your description of Grimmauld Place so elaborate and realistic, I felt like I was the one walking through the house. You've also described the way Harry walked through the house and reacted to various things very clearly; it truly felt like watching a movie, so engulfing and vivid.

So, not only is the story well-written but the idea seems quite interesting as well. I'm curious as to which memories the Marauders may have left Harry and how they're going to help Harry to, perhaps, get the closure he seems to seek.

I think the prologue is ideal in size and content; you've certainly drawn me in. I wish I had more to say, but this is a small chapter. I do hope you'll re-request once you have the next chapter up because I would really love to see where you're going to take this story.

Again, wonderful work! :D

-Manno

Author's Response: Hello there! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

I was wondering whether I'd overdone the description or not and I'm really glad you think it's good! I've tried making the description of Grimmauld Place as accurate as I could and I guess the more you know about something the more you can write about it.

I'm still not sure how to work the memories either so I probably will come calling for some reviews to see how I should take it :P

Thanks again for leaving a review!! I really appreciate it! :D


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