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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
In all of my perusals of the forums, I have never found a story like this!! It's brilliantly written, and I can't wait to read more!

Your characterization of the Peverell brothers was perfect. Antioch seems like the type who would use cruelty to get what he wanted, though I've never really contemplated the trio as children.

Ignotus is, by far, my favorite. You've pegged him perfectly. Maybe you did this on purpose, but it seems that your versions of the brothers have taken shape according to the gifts they chose in the story. I love it!!

I am quite curious to know which fatal disease Anastasia has. I have an inkling, but I don't really want to guess on this review in case I'm wayyy wrong. :) She's another excellent character.

The only bit of constructive criticism that I have is that sometimes in the beginning of the chapter, you used phrases that were a little awkward. It's mostly personal preference stuff, but I think that you could cut down on a few unnecessary words. Just a few, though. No big deal. :)

Anyways... Great beginning, and I hope you post the next chapter very soon!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you for all of your unbelievably generous compliments; they made me squee!

Ah and Ignotus! Actually, Ignotus is based on someone I truly admire and it's always nice to see that you guys like him too. I also like Cadmus whom you guys haven't got much to see of yet! I hope that, as we delve further into the story, you guys like him as well.

Also, I'll try to see again to all of those awkward sentences and see how I can reduce the mess.

Thank you so much for this review! It means a lot to me! :D

-Manno

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