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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I love that you add in the explaination in the end about what is going on in this story and I would really enjoye another oneshot that looked at when she does leave him. I think that this is very interesting and loved the feelings that were displayed in the chapter. I thought you did a good job with this and it was very enjoyable! I never really thought about these two much either in the actual hp world or in fanfiction but I think your oneshot did a great job and I would actually be very interested to read more about these two and how they get together and all the events between them getting together until he kills her. Again I really enjoyed this story! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I thought many people would not know that Travers did actually kill Marlene and just to be sure I added that in my AN otherwise you would get an extremely different view of this story then I planned. To be honest with you neither did I but one day I had a sudden inspiration to write it. My actual intention was to write a Marlene/Sirius but as you can see it ended in this. AS for that I on purposely kept an open end and didn’t choose to write about her murder so that the readers themselves can wonder about it. I gave them a fragment and they have to fill up the rest to their liking whaha. Once again thank you for your lovely review!

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